Jules the jester

I aint much of a poetry fan but i did like this. strange and thoughtful. Thumbs up Jayde. Thumbs up. :)

Really all i can do is echo the others. I did enjoy the story and its line. and i found the mysterious hunter intriguin which i hope you intended.

I enjoyed it. interesting. I like the part were you switched the characters. but i would of preferred a little more information on who his kingdom were fighting and why. ...

I only have my characters wearing cloaks when it is rain or in the middle of winter. I always find it strange in some books when it is the middle ...

Really dark and evil my friend. i didnt know you wrote these sort of things. I aint much of a horror fan but i enjoyed it. I didnt enjoy the ...

"I wander the forest in the hunt of those beasts that are killing my people"~ Culas Two-Swords What was the most dangerous event in your life? [/i]

I liked it. wasnt expecting james to be kille doff liek that. i especially liked the detail. lots of it. look forward to more.

Enjoyed it but i believe that it moved a bit too quick for my liking. slow down the plotline a bit and expand on the details. i also got a ...

Thanks alot to you all. very helpful. :D

I liked it. very anti conformity. reminded me of a friend i have. looking forward to more

After all your last kind Critiques i decided to completly revise my Prologue. Prologue In the beginning the land, and the inhabitants, were ruled over by a godlike race of ...

Well if i was forced to choose it has to be in this order. Lord Of The Rings By J.R.R Tolkien - just timeless. The First Chronicles Of Druss The ...

David gemmel for sure. Terry pratchett. Hilarious Raymon E Feist David Eddings (if you havent read the Belgariad then your missing ou) All of them are my favourite authors. My ...

Thank you for being truthful and i will indeed do as you advise.

Please Do critique my writing and tell me exactly what you think :D Prologue The castle came alive as fire rained down upon it. Three dragons circled the sky above ...